Writing your own website is like trying to write a label from inside the jar.
Trust me, you really are too close to it.
Especially if you write websites for a living 😉
You have so much to say and you want to say it all.
Which gets super confusing for your prospect.
I get this a lot:
We don’t know what NOT to say.
See if this helps:
WEBSITE: Turning Point Consulting – Minneapolis, MN
HEADLINE: IMPLEMENT CHANGE. DELIVER GROWTH.
An Executive-Level Resource Partner That Guides Companies Through The Next Phase of Expansion
Within 7 seconds of arriving at Turning Point’s website, you understand the benefit to YOUR business and what sets these consultants apart from literally millions of others.
I’m here,
Kevin
P.S. Curious how your website would sound if it were laser-focused on your prospect? Reply to this email with your current web address and I’ll respond with a 7-Second review that’s yours to keep 🙂