Your prospect knows they have a problem but they’d rather it be your problem 😉
See if this helps:
WEBSITE: Perfectly Placed – St. Louis, MO
FIRST 7 SECONDS: We Organize Your Stuff So Life Is Easier
Professional Organizing, Unpacking, Home Staging & Custom Closets
It’s a lot to unpack, as they say, in just 7 seconds.
Starting with the word “Stuff” which makes me think “Hoarder”
I THINK IT SHOULD BE: Find a Place for Everything
Because the prospect’s problem is not too much stuff
It’s feeling crappy
About having too much stuff 😔
P.S. The sub-headline could use a little love too: Unpack, Organize Your Home, Customize Your Closet. The prospect was feeling stressed about their “stuff.” Now they’re the hero that’s crushing it 🙌
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