When your prospect starts thinking they could do what you do, that’s them identifying with your business.
See if this helps:
WEBSITE: Data Clariti – New York, NY
CURRENT 7 SECONDS: We build data solutions for mid-sized and Fortune 1000 CEOs.
I THINK IT SHOULD BE: Make Decisions That Grow Profits
Data solutions for Fortune 1000 CEOs
Guarantee you Fortune 1000 CEOs do not want “data solutions.”
There’s no glory in it.
With a different headline, they can see themselves
At the end of their engagement with Data Clariti
As the one who called the shots
P.S. This came from a website video review. Data Clariti was kind enough to allow me to share it here. Want one too? Reply to this email and you shall receive 🙂
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